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Re: Hello
Hi insertwordshere, This is AkankshaD for a review. I liked your topic and the way you crafted this beautiful poem. It is filled with deep thoughts and an inevitable truth. ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: Living Hell
Hey Viktuuri, AkankshaD here for the review and a little counselling. I think what you wrote now was something born out of your frustration, your anxiety and anger. Why do ...
Feb 19, 2017 -
Re: When He Nothing Shines Upon
Hey cub, AkankshaD here for a review; First of all congrats for your first literary work and the first review from me! I can conjecture from your writing that your ...
Feb 16, 2017 -
Re: Suicide Smiles
Oh my God! R u really a 13 year old girl? What a work! I loved this either because I too write these kind of short stories or it's really ...
Feb 12, 2017 -
Re: simple math
hey, TheStormAroundMe,(cool name) I guess you are a math -a-maniac! The first four lines were astounding !This was again a free verse poem I have read on this site. You ...
Feb 10, 2017 -
Re: my life's at a standstill
Hey Kal , This is a very light hearted piece of poetry and simply simple. You used imagery in a fairly good way but it could have been a little ...
Feb 10, 2017 -
Re: Sometimes Between
Dear Alliyah, Your style of writing is philosophical, simple and it seems you are a deep thinker . The way you placed your words in this poem , it really ...
Feb 8, 2017 -
Re: Dear Donald Trump
Yes , of course, you and everyone has the freedom to express one's feelings. I liked your poem as I 'm a Trump hater too. It was a like sweet ...
Feb 8, 2017 -
Re: The End
Dear Sharphost , This literary work reminded me of the book," The boy in striped pyjamas". Dark truth of the holocaust and mass killings of hundreds of Jews. Your style ...
Jan 21, 2017 -
Re: Lingerie, Bing Crosby, and Belly Bulge... Thoughts on Christmas Eve.
I just love this! you wrote it so honestly and with such a simplicity that I started feeling elated for not having a boyfriend. For the writing, I appreciate that ...
Jan 21, 2017 -
Re: Mass molestation in Bengaluru, India
That's true. It is said that one feels the most comfortable in his/her country. I'm a girl and even when I'm at my home, with my parents watching a news ...
Jan 16, 2017
