Aianarie

Ooh, very nice. This poem flows beautifully, and the rhythm is excellent. I can definitely tell that this is a personal poem, bless your heart for what you are/had been ...

This is a really cool poem. The rhythm is even, which is something that I really look for in a poem. It should sound right when you read it out ...

Nice poem, not bad! I like the idea of it, and your spelling and grammar looks good. But I will mention that your poem's layout is kind of awkward, I ...

Hmm, I like the story here, emotional (it's sad!), but the poem's style is a little boring. I think you need to add more imagery, integrate some interesting word usage, ...

Hmm, well I can't say this is quite my style of poem, but it is indeed interesting. I do, however, like the lines that are in between the boom-boom lines. ...

Wow, this poem kind of scares me. Ha ha, no, it's beautiful. So simple, and mysterious. I particularly like the imagery, which is usually my favorite aspect of poem. I ...

Oh wow, that was soooo beautiful! It's not difficult to get me transfixed within the lines of good poetry or literature, but you sure did it well! The imagery and ...

Ha! This is awesome, and so, so true! Although I personally like the color red because it symbolizes love and romance. Maybe you should add another paragraph talking about the ...

Okay, this is a good poem. I like the ideas presented here, though slightly prosaic, the elements are well arranged. However, I think that your lines are a bit off-balanced. ...