Aedomir

I really liked this, but don't fall into the trap that many others do, and write a fantastic piece but end up acting it really badly. I liked it, not ...

Ye, I agree with everyone esle. Funny original, interesting, exciting! Nice and lighthearted after the crappy day I've been having. You've just made me happy! Keep writing! ~D'Aedomir~

I can'r review lyrics to save my life, but I liked this. It wasn't my favourite, but I like where you are going. I am not sure 'many' and 'uncanny' ...

English government didn't have Prime Ministers until the 1950s and Anyway, here is chapter two! I hope that you like it! It's not nearly as boring as chapter one. Don't ...

OK, you rally need to split up the chaptes, put a line in betweenm you are gona scare a lot of people off.

Thanks very much! Nice to meet you, I'm Mark. Have you posted anything? I'll have a loom I think.

Intriguing story! The way that you managed to type the letter 'i' so incredibly! Please put it up again, so I may read and review it. I don't know why ...

Thanks everyone!

The rules are that for every 1 you post, you should review two... Il review this in a minute

wow i thought that was really good, cute and friendly. Im not really a romance guy, but I thought this was great!

I don't get the joke for scene 1!! Can you explain it to me please, then I'll critique it!! from what I read I thought it was funny lol

lol I have no idea how I got so many hits, I think most people read my stories and then read the rest... I dont really know lol. Ye I ...

Thank you very much Jabber! This has been a very mixed chapter, two for and two against. Much of my writing is very opinion based, but thanks are crtainly in ...

Thanks BBB. and jezza ye it makes sense i suppse but i think i will change it neway, seems a bit weird lol

Thanks jabber! I hate to think how long that must have taken! They wer all very notable suggestions though, many which I should have seen before. Thanks again! Oh and ...