Aedomir

Heya! Right, well I am quite mixed up about this. I think the description and the imagery was beautiful, but the characters lacked... emotion. At least, that's what I thought. ...

I really can tell that you're poet when I read your stuff. The way you use such fantastic imagery, and the present tense. Excellent! I'm usually more detailed than this, ...

Heya! Let's have a look... I don't think I've read anything else of yours. 'I spotted him in one of the trees, curled up against the hard bark, apparently sleeping. ...

Hey! I didn't know you did poetry! I liked this, and the idea of repeating 'she is the girl I met today' was an excellent idea. This is a great ...

This was brill, honestly. A bit of rhyming would have been nice, to my opinion, but I;m not sure to be fair, because I know sod-all about poetry and the ...

That was really good! I might not be an expert on poetry, but this was really grat. It flowed very well, and the rhyming was super. The stanzas are set ...

First submission? Don't worry, we're nice here! :-D 'Birds flew out of the trees unexpectedly.' If you want to make it sound strange, I am not convinced this is the ...

Heya! I liked the first line of chapter two, it was descitpive and nicely done, but far frmo OTT. This really good, and I'm sorry but I can't do grammar. ...

Hiya! We reach at last... the grat battle of our time... Sorry, ignore me... Anyhow, this is no dispapointment. It's great how you managed to pull this out of your ...

Nice diary entries, its a good idea. Not too clieche either, its barely done. :-D I'd like to see more please! Oh wait, there is another one! 'I know that ...

Heya! Don't we all just hate writer's block? lol. This was really good, a grat job. Not too overboard with girly stuff either to my opinion. Sorry this is breif, ...

I thought that both the Lord of the Rings film, and books were the msot increidble of the genre I have ever seen. They remain my altime favourites, and there ...

Hiya! Well, I think you're spot on with grammar, so no worries there, except if you skim through you will see what could do with a minor facelift! This is ...

Heya Kyte! Shall we have a look? 'Well, they're not. I can tell you a thing about dragons.' That last bit sounds really cheap, try 'I can tell you a ...

Hi BBB! Nice to see some more work from you (I must read 'I think I'm in Love') It's intersting how you managed to write a story fom a dream, ...