Adriana

Hey ^^ Well, I think what you did here is really good, but you asked for my opinion, right? So here it goes: I think you should work more on ...

heey there!! Well, you have an amazing story here, but there are a few things you need to change to turn it into a hit ^^ " Not so long ...

AAAWWWWW I don't know if it's because I'm in love, but this is the best thing I've read in a while... Seriously, darling, it is so full of emotion, and ...

Hey, Ren!! I love Halloween and now I love it even more ^^ This is a cute poem of yours. Well, I don't think "cute" would be the word, right?! ...

Soul, this is amazing! I know I haven't been writing any review for your novel, but that's just because I feel I can't help... Anyway, I found something in this ...

Hi, there! First of all, I must say this is an amazin poem, and I wouldn't be surprised if it gets featured! Walking home in the premature dark, I saw ...

Hi!! First of all, I loved your story! It is real and what impressed me the most was that it really sounds like something a child would do and say. ...

Hey, volleyball!! Well, I didn't read any of the previous reviews, so, I'm sorry if I say something that was already said before... I really like where the story is ...

Hey there again, Noelle!! This is a great chapter! Congratulations! The only thing I could find was the repetition of the word "window" in here: But then I saw the ...

Hey, Noelle!! I'm a huge Peter Pan fan and loved your story!! I just can't wait to read more! My brothers and I are Peter’s biggest fans. We’ve spent our ...

Hi!! First of all, let me say I loved your nickname!! I'm just crazy for volleyball! But, now, your story... Seventy-five years ago, a little girl lived in a house ...

HI!! First of all, this is a great story you have here!! I love it! I called her Rose. Rose for her soft red lips. Rose for her tall, slender, ...

Oh, dear, I love it!! You should smile way more often It gets me on such a high Flash forward to the morning And I wish I want to die ...

Sweetie, this is soooo beautiful!! I really love it... What is love, you ask. Love is sweeter than honey, It is warmer than the sun, It blinds your eyes, It ...

Hello!! Well, I must say I loved your story. So, me and my big mouth said I would write an extended piece of substantial writing about a sensitive topic. I ...