Adolia1998

ur welcome

ur welcome

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This was nicely written... Why the lack of quotations though?

I love your writing style and you are very descriptive. Please to review one of my work

My son, Abraham is a cute little boy with blonde hair and blue eyes he is 2 years .. (Place a full stop in between the eyes and he. Please ...

Minor mistake in the third line, instead of 'you color'. It should be 'your color' I liked this poem, its different.

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me and my brother--> this should be 'my brother and I" New orleans ---> Orleans should be capitalized You have 'run-on' sentences and punctuation marks are needed. There are numerous ...

How does someone sit "properly?" I mean, is it proper because that's where she's supposed to be or is it the way she is sitting? ----> that was a mistake. ...

Firstly I will say that I like where this is going. It's got a tone of loss and sadness, but also in my opinion a hint of mystery. For instance, ...

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Thank you, I am happy you enjoyed the story. I will make the necessary corrections.

Thank you... I will make the necessary corrections

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