AdmiralKat

First thing that I think of when I read this. Wow! This is such a wonderful piece. It has a few issues but wow. I love this! I has a ...

This poem is unique and I know people will repeat this over and over to you but it is wonderfully unique. Not as in bad unique but as in beautifully ...

This poem is very touching to me. It talks about the struggles of starting a poem(in some way). When I say something, I am suggesting it, you don't have to ...

This is such a cute poem. I love the description and how you are wanting to know what is going to happen to Mikey and what he had done. I ...

I may say that Wolf beat you at this contest. I love this poem and how it brings out the theme really well. I think this is true happiness. The ...

I love this poem. I will be sure to show this to my friends. Now to get to reviewing. I must say in the second stanza, first line, you said ...

Wolf this is the worst poem that I have ever seen! I doesn't even rhyme! Also it has no rhythm and it has no style. What I advise is when ...

I like the general idea of this essay but I think it needs to be more smooth. You should elaborate on the idea a bit more and have more transition ...

What I recommend is that you organize your poem better. You may want to break it into stanzas and make sure that the sentences start on a new line. You ...

This is such a funny poem! I think you could construct the stanzas a little better. The rhyming is what makes it really good and plus you can relate to ...

I loved this piece that you have created. As the first review says, there is random capitalization but I understand those were supposed to be stanzas. The symbolism is perfect ...