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AdjiFlex

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Facing the Flames

    I look forward to reading more of your work.

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: OutKast: Intro

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    AdjiFlex here for a review. I like the idea here. Also, the piece was pretty clean in terms of grammar. There are a few errors, like sentence fragments. Take a ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: OutKast: Intro

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    Good work.

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 2: War for Libson

    Thanks a lot for the review! (Blade is certainly one of my favorite characters)

    May 31, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Dot on a Page

    thanks for the review. It is helpful.

    May 31, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Dot on a Page

    Reaching back here for a review of what I posted here and it seems I didn't reply to this review! Sorry for taking so long to reply. This review is ...

    May 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 1: Aftermath

    Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'll take a second look at that goodbye scene. Sorry confusing you with the many names and so on. Book one would have given you ...

    May 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 1: Aftermath

    Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'll take a second look at that goodbye scene. Sorry confusing you with the many names and so on. Book one would have given you ...

    May 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Dad

    This poem really seems to not have been stemmed from random thought. It is emotionally intense, and quite relatable to many. It's a good work.

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Literature, General Re: A sequel to my article: Unblocking the writer's block!

    Nice, nice.

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Deceptions

    ah. but I'm glad you didn't say it. Better to let the "too late" be as vague as it is now, so each reader can look at it his own ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: A satire of Satire

    Heh. This is genius.

    Aug 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 4(P1): Paths of Ogal Hands

    Thanks for yet another review. As for the formality, well most of the characters here are higher-ups/nobles so they don't have very down-to-earth speech habits.

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Black Eyes Book 1: The Seventh Spirit Chapter 10: The Sludge

    Thanks for your review and your good advice.

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Black Eyes Book 1: The Seventh Spirit Chapter 10: The Sludge

    Thanks for reviewing!

    Jul 28, 2014


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