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Re: Facing the Flames
I look forward to reading more of your work.
May 31, 2015 -
Re: OutKast: Intro
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May 31, 2015
AdjiFlex here for a review. I like the idea here. Also, the piece was pretty clean in terms of grammar. There are a few errors, like sentence fragments. Take a ... -
Re: OutKast: Intro
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Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 2: War for Libson
Thanks a lot for the review! (Blade is certainly one of my favorite characters)
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Dot on a Page
thanks for the review. It is helpful.
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Dot on a Page
Reaching back here for a review of what I posted here and it seems I didn't reply to this review! Sorry for taking so long to reply. This review is ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 1: Aftermath
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'll take a second look at that goodbye scene. Sorry confusing you with the many names and so on. Book one would have given you ...
May 28, 2015 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 1: Aftermath
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'll take a second look at that goodbye scene. Sorry confusing you with the many names and so on. Book one would have given you ...
May 28, 2015 -
Re: Dad
This poem really seems to not have been stemmed from random thought. It is emotionally intense, and quite relatable to many. It's a good work.
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: A sequel to my article: Unblocking the writer's block!
Nice, nice.
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Deceptions
ah. but I'm glad you didn't say it. Better to let the "too late" be as vague as it is now, so each reader can look at it his own ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: A satire of Satire
Heh. This is genius.
Aug 4, 2014 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 4(P1): Paths of Ogal Hands
Thanks for yet another review. As for the formality, well most of the characters here are higher-ups/nobles so they don't have very down-to-earth speech habits.
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Black Eyes Book 1: The Seventh Spirit Chapter 10: The Sludge
Thanks for your review and your good advice.
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Black Eyes Book 1: The Seventh Spirit Chapter 10: The Sludge
Thanks for reviewing!
Jul 28, 2014
