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If nothing else, this is an interesting piece. *Sigh* Not very often I encounter a poem that is not dragging on about dark and light and love and death and ...

Nice, poem, though the whole idea of perfection not truly existing has become cliche in poetry. Saying you "know" in line 6 is a little forceful, though we understand the ...

A good piece of work that can be read 10 times and seen differently in each reading. The whole dark/light theme is overcliched but I won't kill you for that. ...

Heh. Certainly not the longest poem I've seen. Writing two-line poems can be a very difficult thing, as you still have to give the readers the satisfaction of reading a ...

Heheheh! Real nice piece of work here. Imagine this in a huge pop-up picture book with each stanza illustrated on a page. I would buy this story for my kids! ...

Nice piece of writing this is! I like the poetic style of metaphors and a few similes. They made the reading enjoyable, as they were not overbearing and did not ...

Refreshing, if not anything else! Candid and random, as thoughts are. Why should all poetry be about dark and light and love and death? A random cat is just as ...

Every seasoned writer, even young writers, should be able to relate to this perfectly! It's a bit sad (though humorous) how in the end the writers' block (embodied by the ...

Under the not so perfect grammar and that technical stuff is really a brilliant poem here. I won't do any nitpicking this time, but you won't escape- other reviewers have ...

My professor once told me that words like "dark" and "light" should be banned from poetry because of their constant use and staleness. Yes, the interplay with dark and light ...

Now this is a wonderful, refreshing piece of fiction. The introductory paragraph is hardly anything short of perfect. As Alex said, it is kind of in the wrong genre (horror). ...

Wow. I must say, these are more than just words on a page. From the first line, I was worried that this would be some cliched foolishness, but I am ...

You may see this as just a short now, but picture this a prologue to a murder/mystery novella. Very good imagery, I must say. There were very few grammatical glitches, ...

Poetry, the densest art in language, should be deep, and not wide, so don't worry about the shortness of your poem, just ensure that there are enough layers of meaning ...

I like the idea of the poem, let's start with that. Consider removing the first stanza for 2 reasons. Firstly, it is very unpoetic (at least compared to everything else ...