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Re: The Night Sky
Hey Ilium! It’s Addison! I really, truly like this poem. I don’t see at ALL why you called it cringy! It has a lyrical feel, like someone could compose a ...
Jun 22, 2021 -
Re: what others don't see
Hello PixieStix! My name is Addison, and I’m here to review your poem! :)) I enjoyed this a lot, good job! I feel like the vibe of people not knowing ...
Jun 19, 2021 -
Re: Pride Month: Definitions and Explanations for (Almost) Everything!
Hello WinterWolf0100! My name is Addison. This was such an amazing and informative work. And happy pride month I’m sure this will help so many people to become well informed! ...
Jun 19, 2021 -
Re: Buy The Excitement Shower! With it you can experience the Arctic or the depths of hell!
Hello MaybeAndrew! My name is Addison, and I really liked your piece a lot! Some pros - it made me laugh! You did a very good job incorporating humor for ...
Jun 19, 2021 -
Re: Falter
Hello TheOffBroadwayAuthor! (love your name, by the way :) ) As someone who struggles with trauma, depression, and other mental health issues, I definitely appreciate this poem. It captures the ...
Apr 22, 2021 -
Re: The seventh grade
Hello nightshadows and emivanz1! I really like your guys' poem, and I love the way it's written. It truly captures the essence of a middle school love story, and the ...
Apr 22, 2021 -
Re: We Lift Our Burdens
Hello! My name is Addison. This poem truly was beautiful, and I can see that you put tons of work into it. The melodic beat of the poem is almost ...
Apr 22, 2021 -
Re: I don't have wounds to make my words bleed
Hello there Haraya! My name's Addison! Something about this piece thoroughly resonates with me. The first line drew me in, the second stanza captured me, and the fourth completely drove ...
Apr 17, 2021 -
Re: quiet hello, quiet goodbye
This poem is very beautiful. However, something about the way you write this confuses me a tad bit though, is it a crush? A lost friendship? A previous relationship that ...
Apr 17, 2021