Abigail_W.

I agree with Lumi and I greatly admire Lumi's honesty and bluntness.

Hi Katie, thanks a lot for the review!

Hi Rosie! Thank you so much for the wonderful review. To be honest, I'm not a fan of the capitalization either, but I can't figure out how to get Microsoft ...

Thank you all very much for the reviews and feedback!

Wow. This is absolutely fantastic! That's all I can say. My one correction would be that you forgot the "t" one of the times you wrote the word "won't". That's ...

Thanks! I'm not the greatest at spelling :) No prob. :D Those of us who are not the greatest at spelling were lucky to have been born in the modern ...

Ay, ay, ay. I just wrote a whole long, intricate, helpful review, only to find that Internet Explorer couldn't display the webpage. I hate it when that happens. So, I ...

Yes, Flower~Child, I agree with Suzanne about it being a line from Rober Frost's poem. You should probably change the title, to avoid accusations of plagiarism.

May I ask what competition you guys are talking about? I'm interested in trying!

Oh, you should have! Especially if it was against other people your age!

I must admit, I'm quite scared. So, you know, I'm not really gonna pick at this all that much, since, you know, I'm kinda scared. But, it's Oscar the Grouch. ...

Oh, I see! Perhaps you could make this point clearer, whether with another stanza or some sort of a prologue. Thanks for letting us know!

I really appreciate the comments, everyone! I am going to work on it more right now ...

I really appreciate the input; this is just a poem in the works. By the way, I absolutely love your icon -- Jimi Hendrix is the best rockstar of all ...

Thanks for the comments!