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Hi Mikaylakk25! I think I'll go through and edit some things in red, first. Maya picked at her turkey sandwich while studying for her science test. The test was next ...

Hi LukanRinta! How are you? I think this is my favorite poem of yours. I'm trying to find something wrong with it, but I really, honestly can't detect very many ...

Hi Dange93! Hmm, let's see ... O Catholic Religion how great you are! What love oozes from your veins. Nothing is blind to you, even though those who use logic ...

Hi Originalhobbit! This poem flows so well that I couldn't help but say it out loud. The rhymes fall off the tongue without being too stiff and forced, which is ...

Hi LukanRinta! I'll just go through and edit some things in red, first. As I struggle to get free, I think about the last two weeks. You need to be ...

Hi Dreambig_andeiita! I really like this. It flows well and sort of rolls of the tongue -- or mind, I guess, if you're reading it aloud. I sort of get ...

Well, what everyone else said! The only other flaw that I can see is that "2" should be "two." Depending on style, using digits instead of writing out the numbers ...

Hi TPak! First things first, I love your little signature thingy on top of your avatar. I agree. I have never been a Harry Potter fan or a Twilight fan. ...

Well, I agree with Dream_Catcher. But it's okay if a poem is elementary; maybe it was intended for elementary readers. The main thing wrong with this poem is the lack ...

Hi Palantalid! I might recommend that you repost "Coffee Stain" and "Cruel is the Night" in separate topics. It's really a lot to ask someone to review two long poems ...

Well, what PenguinAttack said! I must admit I know exactly what you're talking about. I think I can give you a couple tips on how to make this seem more ...

Hi BenFranks! I hope this review doesn't come out sounding too condescending. It's really not supposed to be. Because, you know, you're the non-fiction guru and I'm nothing close to ...

Hi Kitrosemon13! I love this! It has a very nice beat; have you considered making it into a song? I think I'll go through and edit some technical stuff ... ...

Hi ItsMeNathalie! It is so sweet that you wrote this for your boyfriend. I'm sure he'll love it. I really can't find anything wrong with this poem. It has a ...

Hi Retrodisco666! I love this poem! The only things you really need to fix up are the technical mistakes. Fairground rides make broken hearts, or so I have come to ...