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Harrowing Homes
Husbands sigh upon the bills and rub their eyes in anguish Clorox-scented housewives work to toil over dishes People live the days of life and work upon their chores Children ...
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Rainbow
I often find that, in my eager attempts to be descriptive, my wording becomes very heavy. Criticism is smiled upon!~~~~~~~~~~~The teenager on the corner with the misapplied lip gloss is ...
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Harrowed Homes II
Mind you, the alliteration in the topic description was completely unintended. ~~~~~~~~~~ Workers sigh upon the bills and rub their eyes in anguish Clorox-scented housewives work to toil over dishes ...
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Genetics
Half him and half her course through my veins They are there My hair, my blood, my short fingernails They are me Although I am both, there is but one ...
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Camera
I'm not sure whether the last sentiment is overused or not; that's why I'm asking you. I got the idea of the story when taking a walk on the beach ...
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How to Live with Her
You see her at dinner the night before. Drugged and crazy, her eyes meet with yours for a millisecond. Giant, watery-blue orbs above heavy, heavy, purple bags. Wildly bloodshot. Threatening. ...
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Silas Marner, by George Eliot
When I tell you this is a Victorian novel, I know what you will think: ugh. But this is more than just a long, boring Victorian novel. This is a ...
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Contest Entry
The Original: ... rl&f=falseHans Christian Anderson's The Little Match Girl from the father's point of view.I acknowledge the fact that I am cruel, but you must sympathize with me. I ...
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Easier
Criticism is smiled upon, as I have edited this but once. : DThe light drizzle one summer afternoon merely aggravated the feelings of a middle-aged woman, driving home in her ...
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Contest: God
I press my forehead and nose on the window. It's cold even though it's in the dead of summer on Cape Cod. My mother and I are driving back to ...
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Untitled [about ice skating]
This isn't my first draft, but I have yet to finish editing. My mother insisted that I attend public ice skating with Ashley every Friday night since I was old ...
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Taps
Brassy bugle,Harmonious hymn,Such a moan you mouth like a wounded warrior or a gambling gust outside a tiny house Sacred soundsVivid vibrations,Such a note you knead like batter for baking ...
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Balloon
I wrote this completely on a whim -- it took me no more than fifteen minutes -- so don't expect it to be marvelous.Red latex hides behind spindly branchesLatex that ...
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Rainbow (edited, revised AGAIN)
I often find that, in my eager attempts to be descriptive, my wording becomes very heavy. Criticism is smiled upon! ~~~~~~~~~~~ What a state of paranoia Betsy could throw herself ...
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Homes
I've posted this here before, but have edited it and revised it and done so again. Opinions?Ever-glowing windows housing haggard, drunken menWomen dance in corridors and children jump on bedsPeople ...
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Jealousy
Spoiler! : Hopefully someone will understand the underlying metaphor? Envy's bedroom walls aren't greenaren't battlefield camouflageor an immaculate lawn.They aren't orange with downfalllike a leaf pr
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I Can't Sleep
When the rain won't comeand clothes hang -- limp dishrags;curtains sag;walls stick like a half-eaten plum.I don't rest.Even when the rain comesand there's a green smell in the rooms,things are ...
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Blessed Blaze
Spoiler! : I wrote this when I was twelve for NaNoWriMo. It is utter and complete ****, but I like the plot. I proofread it, and it's as though it ...
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Bess's Brothers
Spoiler! : I wrote this a while ago about Queen Elizabeth I of England. Her father, King Henry VIII, wanted a male heir to the throne, but her mother, Anne ...
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to live
I possess an overwhelming knowledge – Painful clamor of gratitude meanwhile ringing in my ears –
