Aadygirl

Hey viv! You've a wonderful piece here. Aadygirl's here to review! The title and description... The title is quite suitable to the situation. Very mysterious and eerie, so to say. ...

Hey ConverseFireGirl, Firstly, the Title This was a really interesting poem. What really made me want to review it was the title. I think you should have added an 'a' ...

Hey SageofthePage! Your story was beautiful. I absolutely loved it! It taught me so much and was really intriguing. It kept me reading till the last page sentence. However, there ...

Hey smile! This work of yours seems to be like lyrics of a song that'd get the groove going. But the thing is, I found MANY grammar and punctuation errors. ...

Hey Odysseus310! I loved the flow of the letter, and really enjoyed it. The only complaint I have is of one grammar mistakes in the second paragraph. It can't be ...

Hey mahusername! Cool username! I can see what you did there. Easy way to remember, eh? Anyway, your essay, or um, paragraph, was really nice. I loved the thought behind ...

Hi Candrew! I'm kinda new here too, but I am so addicted to YWS already! So much to read, so much to review, and so much to write! Isn't it ...

Hey melg23! I absolutely loved the wait you chose your words. They really described the scene, allowing the reader to imagine the situation vividly. However, a tiny tip: You might ...

Dear KnightTeen, I love your writing style and the way you put your words. I loved how you incorporated a bit of poetry to go with the story. It flowed ...

Hi Nov96! I loved the poem. You know, the best thing about poetry is that you can convey such a strong message through such little words. What I LOVED about ...