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Re: Aphrodite
The poem was beautiful and deep. Aphrodite was an appropriate title. It dealt with pain in the love life. I found it gripping. However your rhyming could have been better ...
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Re: Stranger
The poem was good. Actually it's pretty awesome for your age. But there are certain point's you may want to keep in mind. A full stop is not required after ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Far Away and Long Ago
The poem was beautiful and struck a chord. The reader start's to dream about the long forgotten times and the magical beauty it possessed. Great work there. I don't have ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Sunshine
The poem is really sweet and strikes a chord. Your mom must be really proud. The rhyming was good. It was one of easy to read yet touching poems. But ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Conquered
The poem had a dark, rich quality which was absolutely amazing. I love the you talk about the negativity building up inside. And your ability to conquer it. The imagery ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Hanged
The poem was great. And the imagery, flawless. I loved the way it talks about temporal hell. There was a dark sickly terror in the poem which made me cling ...
Jun 30, 2011