You’re the thing that keeps me going, when everything else is gone.
You’re the one person that believed in me whenever I was wrong.
Your so much more than I could ever as for and you’re the reason for my smile
And when everyone else turns their back on me yours is the first number I dial
I never want to loose you if I ever did I would loose myself
You helped me fight for what I stood for whenever I needed help
You’re the reason I keep going when everything is falling apart
You’re the definition of love and the beat to my heart
Your smile is sweeter than a sunset and clearer than the blue sky
At times I wonder how you love a fool like me and I would like to ask you why
You’re the hand I hold when I need a friend
You’re the person I turn to and you’ll be there till the end
I never want to see you hurt or to ever see you cry
You’re the reason I live and you give me my wings so I can fly
You don’t know how much you mean to me
And I live to show you everyday
Just how incredible you really are and how with each word you take my breath away
I want you to know you’re my sunshine
You’re my clock when I run out of time
You’re the salt to my pepper
And you’re the sun to my stormy weather
You’re a beautiful person
And you cant even see
All the great things you have done for me
So now I would just like to thank you and apologize for all of my wrong
This poem is for you I love you mom.
This poem is awesome, not corny at all. It puts in words the exact feelings I have for my mother. I love her dearly, and this poem is a great gift for a mom. You should publish it, it would be awesome as a song, too. there are some spelling mistakes, but I'm not in the picky mood. I saw what you meant, no I actually heard it, like a song. This poem made my day!!!!
The poem is really sweet and strikes a chord. Your mom must be really proud. The rhyming was good. It was one of easy to read yet touching poems.
But there were a couple of spelling mistake which I'm you will attend to next time. And according to me the lines were a bit too long for comfort. But all in all a great poem for - I'm sure- a Great mom.
Keep it up! =)
This is truly beautiful, though you're right: it is a little corny and there are some clichés but it's still very sweet. You need only to touch up on some punctuations like adding a few commas and full stops in some areas.
Add a 'k' to 'as' in the line:
"You're all I could ever ask for"
Again, it's very sweet and it's a beautiful gift for a mother!