Published June 30, 2011
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The poem was beautiful and deep. Aphrodite was an appropriate title. It dealt with pain in the love life. I found it gripping.
However your rhyming could have been better and every sentence doesn't have to start with a capital letter.
All in all a good poem. =)
Thanks for the review. I'll take your advice and change it.
Very good! All I caught was in one of the stanzas, you might want to change the second fate to something like destiny. It sounded a bit repetitive. It was very good!