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Thanks a lot! Some of these will also be answered in further chapters. And finding Jen was actually not the entire purpose of the story. Rick thought that would be ...

Just in case you're curious, I'll give a little more info/answer a few questions. Right now, Jen is the most interesting character, but Rick will gain some abilities to at ...

I really appreciate the review. If you're really interested, I have posted the second chapter. You might enjoy seeing what happens along the line, but the one thing that certainly ...

I will review soon, once I get my hands on my laptop. Might be a few days since I'm out of town.

I marcheth forth.

I'm cracking up. I can't leave a review right now, sorry. I'm laughing too hard.

Beautiful... This is really good. I don't have anything to correct or review here. :D

:3 thanks! I have about two chapters atm, I just dont have enough points to publish them... :P

It means a ton! Thanks a lot for the review :D You're right, I have a little trouble with that. I find myself standing in my characters shoes, and accidentally ...

Nice! I think you've summed up the general feelings of unknown authors and poets everywhere. Great work on this! I didn't see any grammatical mistakes, but you probably want a ...

Ok, thanks for the review! As I said in your earlier reviews, they do have a limit of jumps, so they can't just waltz around wasting them. :3

Thanks for the review! as I mentioned in a few other comments, I screwed up with the compiler. My chapters are normally made in paragraphs. :) All of your criticism ...

awesome!

Woah, I wrote a lot.

thanks for the review! Yeah, i had a compiler error with the last few chapters. Sorry about that, I do, in fact, write normally. XD