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Wow. Thank you for that. I am relieved that it's not based a real events, but it happens all the time, so I can't be too happy. From the beginning, ...

Wow. That was amazing and lovely in its own special way. There were some points where spelling was slightly off or a bit of grammar. For example, it would say ...

This was an intriguing story, and I liked it. There was good descriptive words, that added to it nicely. I do have some corrections, so bear with me. My sweat ...

Yay, you posted part 2! :) I was very excited to discover this here, and jumped right on it. Once again, like part 1, it was very good. The words ...

This is so good and very unexpected. I was looking for anything to amuse or entertain me, and this definitely did more than I thought it would. It was creative ...

This is a really cool beginning of a story. You should definitely run with it and make it longer. The only thing I would say is maybe replace the word ...

I loved this short story! It was very creative, though maybe change the word monster so it's not so repetitive. The same thing with the word exclaimed, as it was ...