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Re: Country Mouse Chapter 4
I liked it! I've always loved those sweet stories about the animals that can talk, and this fits the bill perfectly. You have a great, very classic writing style, with ...
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Re: Carving a New Future
Well, I'm not exactly sure of the message you are trying to convey. If it is that this sort of thing is so disappointing to see and you wish it ...
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Re: A Frost Forest
Lol, this is awesome. Not only the picture, but your poem as well. You've done a great job here of really bringing the picture to life. "A picture is worth ...
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Re: Falling
"up over the endlessly falling snow and cheesy winter rhymes." This is not something meant to be offensive, but "cheesy winter rhymes" is exactly what I think when I read ...
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Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter two
This is, like the first part, very well written. I found myself deeply engrossed in it and did not want to stop reading. You do very well at allowing the ...
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Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter Three
Well, I can't say that I like morbid horror. It never has been my cup of tea, if you know what I'm saying, but there are those who like it. ...
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Re: Nothing but a Charlatan
Great job! This was very inciteful, and I love the interesting way that you put it together. "i stand upon an island of trash (treasures that do sparkle and flash) ...
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Re: The Fourth World: Chapter One
I read the fourth chapter, part 4 first, and was instantly drawn in. This isn't any less interesting. For starters, I'll get my one nitpick out of the way, "Grey. ...
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Re: The Fourth World: Ch4 Part 2
This is great! I haven't read the first parts yet, but I plan to now! Your writing style is very smooth and flowing. You don't overwhelm the reader with a ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Strangers
"Not everyone is nice, But everyone is mean." Very interesting oxymoron here. So true to life, though. We put on a good face, but all the while the one on ...
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Re: The Color of Pain
This was a very sad, yet strangely beautiful poem. I can sense the "pain" behind it, but it's not so much the pain that we associate with live, but rather ...
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Re: Cheesy Love Poem :O
I wouldn't call this cheesy, really. It was a little silly, but still quite good. The subject of love has been overused, a lot. Everyone who writes poetry has probably ...
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Re: Complications chapter three
I've now noticed that you are essentially following the story line of the new Star Trek movie. This isn't a bad thing, as long as you stay true to the ...
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Re: Complications chapter two
I enjoyed reading this. It flowed a little better than the prologue, and you stayed true to the classic Star Trek feel of docking to the Spaceport. You also have ...
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Re: Prologue to the Complications of love and logic.
To start, I love Star Trek, so this is great in the sense that it's some fan art about it. But, setting that aside and moving to the review. This ...
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