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Re: Bastardization of Tagore's "Over the Green and Yellow"
First question: What's the point? Tagore's poem isn't bad, it's actually quite good, and it's not like you've done anything interesting with it here. So, like I all ready asked, ...
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Re: As Part of The Love Club
This was an interesting poem, with an interesting idea behind it. I like that you are separating "The Love Club" out from love itself. Some people don't in cases like ...
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Re: Opposites Attract
This was a great poem. I loved the symbolism and descriptive language you used that made it fun to read and spiced up your simple subject. "and the tears I ...
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Re: Three Hundred Sixty Four
Wow, this was a moving piece. "Three Hundred Sixty Four. There’s only one day that the world stands still for two silent minutes And that’s when the world becomes real." ...
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Re: Company
This is going to be an honest review, so don't get mad. Yes, people will say that poetry just means words put into stanzas and infused with thoughts or emotions. ...
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Re: Human?
Well, first off, "---- This is to all the out-of-love-and-full-of-hate-towards-other-people terrorists, who mercilessly kill innocents everyday. ----" There's actually less of this going on then you t
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Re: Apostrophe #4
This was an interesting poem. I wasn't exactly sure what I should take from it. The meaning behind it was a little clouded with your open ended questions and explanations ...
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Re: The acrobat
This is great. I like the sort of mystical, whimsical feel to it. You did a good job of talking about something interesting, rather than just repeating what so many ...
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Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter Three (Working title) Scrapped
First, I'll get the nitpicks out of the way. "The sun traipsed in, flooding the grey and green city-scape with brilliant reds and blues." Grey should be Gray, as Gray ...
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Re: Where have I been?
"iridescent people haunt the sidewalk staring down illuminated by lights portable standards which stain their faces white Is this me?" This would be a great poem just by itself, but ...
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Re: Broken Pieces
This is a very well written short. Sad that it ends the way it does, but I don't think you were trying to make it very happy, as the subject ...
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