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Re: WoS Ch2 - Enter: Kouji
I will make use of the discussion questions. 1) What was your initial reaction to the chapter? I really enjoyed this chapter. I’m starting to get properly invested in the ...
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Re: Unsolved Deceptions Chapter 2 Monkey See Monkey kill
Bzz - hello -bzz A bee is here to review your work! Pollinating First impressions I enjoyed this chapter. I haven't read the prologue or Chapter 1, so I'm coming ...
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Re: WHERE THE CRUCIFIX BENDS
Bzz - hello -bzz A bee is here to review your work! Pollinating First impressions I enjoyed this poem. The atmosphere is probably its strongest aspect. From the very first ...
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Re: Clowns, Aliens, and a Dragon
Bzz - hello -bzz A bee is here to review your work! Pollinating First impressions I really enjoyed this. It has a very casual, diary-like sense of humor that makes ...
Sep 26 -
Re: A Letter Returned by Time
Bzz - hello -bzz A bee is here to review your work! Pollinating First impressions I enjoyed this poem. The letter is returned not because the recipient died, but because ...
Sep 26 -
Re: WoS Chapter 1 Part 2: Kei
I will make use of your discussion questions. 1) What was your initial reaction to the chapter? I enjoyed this section. It felt more focused than the prologue, since the ...
Sep 25 -
Re: the mess of me
I really enjoyed this poem. The book works really well as the central image. The final lines give the poem a strong sense of closure and recontextualize the book as ...
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Re: I Miss You, I Do
I really enjoyed this poem. The strongest aspect for me is the nostalgia it conveys. The line, “That last sleepover we hadn’t known would be the last,” captures the sentiment ...
Sep 23 -
Re: The Thing You Give Me
I enjoyed this. I have a soft spot for good father figures. I liked the progression of “advice” from something the narrator doesn't understand, to something he needs, and finally ...
Sep 22 -
Re: Chapter 1: Before the beginning
I enjoyed this chapter. Manas and the protagonist have a believable sibling dynamic, and the diary is probably the part that made me most curious about the larger story. The ...
Sep 21 -
Re: As Lowly As Murder
I enjoyed this prose. The opening establishes the conflict immediately, and the narrator does not deny that they stole; instead, they question whether that act makes them a “monster.” The ...
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Re: Gratification
I enjoyed this poem. The repetition gives it a natural, stream-of-consciousness quality, making the speaker’s thoughts feel as if they are unfolding in real time. The typography enhances this effect
Sep 21 -
Re: Invisible
I enjoyed this prose. The premise of the Fold of Burrenholde is immediately interesting, and I especially liked the contrast between the whimsical, storybook narration and the reality of the ...
Sep 20 -
Re: WoS Chapter 1 Part 1: Zoe
I enjoyed this section. I will make use of the discussion questions. 1) What was your initial reaction to this Zoe section? It felt much more lighthearted than the prologue, ...
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Re: Borrowed Memories
I enjoyed this piece. It has a distinct literary voice, and I appreciated the recurring imagery. The severed hand is an effective image; it connects naturally to the idea of ...
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