ABoyAndHisFlyingYeti

That's pretty intense. I'm not exactly sure what the inspiration for this was, nor do i understand it's true meaning, but the flow and diction were pretty... pretty. lol one ...

Thats pretty intense. I dug the flow of it.. it was chaotic and abrupt, and I feel that it fit them theme very well. Just out of curiosity, though, was ...

There are two reason I hope to God this is a piece of fiction, for one, and probably the most obvious its awful and horrible and depressing and I would ...

I'm not really sure what to say about this but that's not because it's dumbfounded or confused me in any way, but because i'm currently running on levels of sleep ...

I'm not going to sugar-coat it, bro, this story confused my balls off. I didn't really comprehend the world, the characters, the conflict. How old was Lisa? When is this ...

I can dig it. loi. This is the kind of poetry i enjoy reading. The rhythm and flow and rhyme-scheme were incredible and beautiful.. until the last couple of lines. ...

Holy balls, that's depressing. lol I love the way you set up the world. I really got a feeling that this was in like, the calm right before the storm ...

I enjoyed this piece because it really explores one of the greatest paradoxes of human existence. this being said, i feel it could use some sort of a plot and ...

Not, gonna lie, bro, i didn't get it.Maybe i'm too stupid to get it. idk. However, it was quite choppy in parts and the plot seemed a little... lacking. I ...

In the words of the Russian on the Insight commercials, "This is epic win." lol. You literally had me rolling on the floor laughing. When i was reading this i ...

this is pretty amazing. Im not exactly sure what "Christianese" is but i think that i pretty much think that all the "Christians" around me are fluent in it. thanks ...