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Re: Triumphant Will
Although I don't actually row myself, I do have a boyfriend who rows a hell of a lot so I think that I do know a bit about the pre-race ...
Oct 30, 2014 -
Re: 15 Reasons Why Daleks Don't Have Showers
I haven't actually watched Dr Who (I'm sorry :() but I still found this really really funny. It's really well-written and well thought out. As well as this, it makes ...
Oct 30, 2014 -
Re: I'm Serious...
One thing that I will say about this piece is that I, like LiteraryAdmirer99, found this piece slightly too long. You see, people stop concentrating when they have to keep ...
Oct 30, 2014 -
Re: Not Just a Box Ch4
Having never watched Doctor Who in my life (am I missing something) I apologise if I make any mistakes as I believe this is inspired by that TV series. I'm ...
Oct 18, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 16
Hi there, I'm here to rescue your writing from the green room! I know you say that this is a rough chapter so I assume that means that you're going ...
Oct 18, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 20: The Soul
First off, I'm just going to apologise for not reading the previous few chapters so if I ask any questions which have already been answered, feel free to ignore me. ...
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: 1
Hey there it's your novels adoptive parent here for a review! One thing which I will say is that, at times, you use the wrong tense of certain words but ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: Beauty and Poison
I read this poem because the title quite simply drew me in. I wanted to know why beauty was poison and what made you feel that way. It's a jolly ...
Sep 3, 2014 -
Re: Heartfelt apologies.
Hi there, I'm here to get your poem out of the dreaded green room! Before I start, I'm just going to tell you that, I don't claim to be a ...
Sep 3, 2014 -
Re: For Fortis
First things first, I respect you enormously for even attempting a sonnet; I usually write one line before giving up. I like the message which is, I think, about being ...
Sep 3, 2014 -
Re: 1
I'm so sorry it's been such a long time before I reviewed any of your work but here I am anyway. Right, I'm going to start with the things which ...
Sep 3, 2014 -
Re: Taking Advice
This is quite an interesting topic for a poem. I like the way you turned a common phrase like 'kill two birds with one stone' into something literal. I like ...
Sep 3, 2014 -
Re: Humanity of war
Poetry really is a brilliant thing to write when you're bored at school, isn't it? I like the way you describe the horrors of war e.g. the scattering of human ...
Sep 3, 2014 -
Re: The Bully. Chapter 2.
I like the fact that you've got the guy who's the school bully also being a good son. It gives him another dimension rather than just calling him a straightforward ...
Aug 15, 2014 -
Re: What is the point of life
I think that this piece has a really interesting message. Everyone has, at some point in their life, wondered what the point of it all is. I like the way ...
Aug 15, 2014
