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  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Triumphant Will

    Although I don't actually row myself, I do have a boyfriend who rows a hell of a lot so I think that I do know a bit about the pre-race ...

    Oct 30, 2014
  • Other » Fanfiction, General Re: 15 Reasons Why Daleks Don't Have Showers

    I haven't actually watched Dr Who (I'm sorry :() but I still found this really really funny. It's really well-written and well thought out. As well as this, it makes ...

    Oct 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Satire, Action / Adventure Re: I'm Serious...

    One thing that I will say about this piece is that I, like LiteraryAdmirer99, found this piece slightly too long. You see, people stop concentrating when they have to keep ...

    Oct 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Not Just a Box Ch4

    Having never watched Doctor Who in my life (am I missing something) I apologise if I make any mistakes as I believe this is inspired by that TV series. I'm ...

    Oct 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 16

    Hi there, I'm here to rescue your writing from the green room! I know you say that this is a rough chapter so I assume that means that you're going ...

    Oct 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 20: The Soul

    First off, I'm just going to apologise for not reading the previous few chapters so if I ask any questions which have already been answered, feel free to ignore me. ...

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: 1

    Hey there it's your novels adoptive parent here for a review! One thing which I will say is that, at times, you use the wrong tense of certain words but ...

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Beauty and Poison

    I read this poem because the title quite simply drew me in. I wanted to know why beauty was poison and what made you feel that way. It's a jolly ...

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Heartfelt apologies.

    Hi there, I'm here to get your poem out of the dreaded green room! Before I start, I'm just going to tell you that, I don't claim to be a ...

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: For Fortis

    First things first, I respect you enormously for even attempting a sonnet; I usually write one line before giving up. I like the message which is, I think, about being ...

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: 1

    I'm so sorry it's been such a long time before I reviewed any of your work but here I am anyway. Right, I'm going to start with the things which ...

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Taking Advice

    This is quite an interesting topic for a poem. I like the way you turned a common phrase like 'kill two birds with one stone' into something literal. I like ...

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Humanity of war

    Poetry really is a brilliant thing to write when you're bored at school, isn't it? I like the way you describe the horrors of war e.g. the scattering of human ...

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: The Bully. Chapter 2.

    I like the fact that you've got the guy who's the school bully also being a good son. It gives him another dimension rather than just calling him a straightforward ...

    Aug 15, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: What is the point of life

    I think that this piece has a really interesting message. Everyone has, at some point in their life, wondered what the point of it all is. I like the way ...

    Aug 15, 2014


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