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thanks for the advice, I've never been the best poetry writer so I've always just stuck with rhyme but I'll have a go at what you suggested! I guess the ...

thank you so much!

I'll be looking forward to reading more as I genuinely really enjoyed it!

I'll be looking forward to reading more as I genuinely really enjoyed it!

:-D Thank you so much

I actually didn't capitalise anything on purpose, as it's part of the structure of the poem, as is the reason it's all in one line. But thank you for the ...

Thank you so much! It really means a lot :-)

ahh thank you! It seems like everyone is confused about that 4th line but I promise that it does make sense, I explained it in the review below aha but ...

ahh thank you!

Thank you so much! And I completely get what you mean about people wanting to get out just disappearing..

Thank you :-) And I will tell her :-) We tried to be loud but we didn't want to drown out the music

Thank you so much!! It means a lot :-) I worked my ass of for months on this, but I must give credit to my friend who sang most of ...

cheers mate :-)

For a first story, it was really good!

thank you so much for the review :-) I really appreciate you pointing out my typo's because I'm always so bad at spotting them. I'm not sure what my desired ...