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thank you so much :-) I see what you mean about the line and I will take that into account. It made sense when I wrote it, aha :-D

wow thank you so much! I will take what you said about the ending into account- I don't particularly like the last stanza either so I probably will delete it. ...

Poems with the most emotions are always the best ones :-)

thank you :-)

Thank you! My grammar is not the best. I only included the now because every line is 10 syllables

ah, I have the opposite, I always have to follow a strict rhyme scheme. To be honest, I don't really think it made that much of a difference to the ...

for some reason this didn't post as a review, even though I'm sure it's enough characters, sorry about that!

Hey! I really liked this poem. I thought that is flowed very well and had some really nice imagery! The rhyme scheme was a little inconsistent, for example in stanza ...

thank you :-) means a lot

ahh thank you so much! honestly this has made my day :-)

thank you for the review! And for the criticisms! I will take them into account!

thank you so much :-)

thank you! :-)

though we are re-doing the vocals today so it'll sound a lot different

me and my friend, yeah :-)