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Thank you so much! This honestly made my day! Yeah I suck at re-reading my own work so that's what I need to work on :-) And I didn't experience ...

Thank you for the review! I will change that sentence as it does sound better without it :-)

i'm not really 100% sure what there is to not understand? I'm not trying to be rude aha but it makes perfect sense to me?

Thank you so much! With regards to the bit you didnt understand I'll try explain: there was a sudden burst of gunfire which MC was use to but she wasn't ...

Thank you! What you said about gunshots makes total sense and I'll probably change that

Ah thank you! It'd be really great if you could point out any grammar/punctuation errors for me!

i mean, cheers yeah. But why did you comment a steve jobs quote on my story?

Thank you!! Glad you like it :-)

Thank you so much!!

Oh thank you! And I completely forgot about the rating whoops. I kind of need the backstories and it will be more important later on but I think I could ...

I was gonna say "I'll be your friend" but then you'd just be recommending my own poem to me lmao. But Thank you so much!

ah don't worry

ahh thank you! Yeah it's a little uncomplete because I hit complete writers block but hopefully next week when I go back to school i Can make the actual song ...

thank you!

Thank you so much! I think word autocorrects everthing to the american spelling which is really annoying as I'm british so I will go back and change it to fantasise. ...