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Ah I'm glad you agree aha, I always get worried that when I post reviews I'll upset someone! I'm probably going to go and read all the other chapters of ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! This feedback has been particularly helpful, as I always make my sentences too long and never realise aha! And yes, they are both girls ...

No problem, and I do hope you are inspired to write some more!

Thank you so much for this review, it is honestly so helpful as everything you said has helped me to improve my work! I'll try and explain some things aha. ...

Thank you so much for the feedback, it was actually incredibly useful and I'm grateful :-)

Thank you so much! The criticism is honestly so helpful, as this was the first SCP story I have written. I mainly just redacted the names and places because I ...

Thank you!

Oh, and I'm English so we spell it "Recognised" with an s :-)

Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate you correcting all my typos! It really means a lot :-) If I'm honest, I'm not too sure whether it ...

Thank you so much!

Thank you so much for the review :-)

Thank you so much for the review! You had some really interesting ideas that I am definitely going to play around with, so thank you so so much!

Thank you so much for the feedback! I will take that into account :-)

thank you so much! This really made my day :-) It would actually be very helpful if you could point out any grammatical errors in the future as I am ...

No problem, I really enjoyed this piece!