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Thank you for pointing out my grammatical errors! It's really helpful, as I'm a terrible proof reader when it comes to my own writing. Thank you for taking the time ...

This is actually very annoying. I would prefer an actual review, please don't comment this again

Thank you so much for the review!

Thank you for the review! With the maroon, i just meant my school jumper was now maroon, so not that clever. I see what you mean about impact and I ...

No problem :-)

Thank you for the review! I never thought about an intercom and that's actually such a good idea!

Thank you for pointing out those little things! I'm rubbish with punctuation so it means a lot! And thank you so much for thr review

uh, woah, thank I guess! Very, ahem, detailed review there. There are two previous chapters if you would care to read them :-0

no problem! And cheers

Thanks for pointing out my typo! And for reviewing :-)

No problem! :-)

Aha, thank you for the review! I actually meant that he had a really red face but I can see where that would be confusing, so I might go back ...

No problem, I really enjoyed reading it! It was something new and refreshing

No problem! I always take more time looking for mistakes in a really great piece of writing, because when they're corrected it will be amazing:-)

Ahh thank you so much!!