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Re: The Sculptor's Knife: Chapter 1.1.2
Good job. My thoughts: Ashton: Ok I think I like him but I want more detail on him and his family life. So how old is he? What do you ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Help
Wow that was really sad but so true! This is really well written and I think you should write more! I understand dealing with that pain, I lost my grandfather ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Intangible Part 7-Another One?!
My thoughts on the last 3 or 4 chapters: Tabby: Ok I like her a lot! She seems so smart! So proud of her! I wish I knew more about ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Intangible Part 2-Vindictive Threats and Things Gone Wrong
Ok so WHAT THE HECK?!?!?!?! Who the Heck is Tabby?! AND WHO THE HECK IS THAT WITCH?!?!?!?!!? Callie: Did she turn into someone named Tabby? I DON'T UNDERSTAND!!!!!! How many ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Intangible Part 1-Grant My Wish
I don't like this as much as I liked the prologue I am sorry. I felt like this needed more details and the prologue had more details. I don't understand ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Intangible Prologue
WOW THAT WAS GREAT! My thoughts: Calliope: Wow that is a great sister and something I can totally relate to because I would have done that. She seems to be ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Fourteen
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My thoughts: Ky: THAT POOR POOR GIRL!!!! Oh my goodness Aleth is a monster and I want to kill him!!! Aleth: THAT ***** I wont say
Feb 17, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Thirteen
I'M GOING TO KILL ALETH!!!!!! (Me after reading each chapter storms around the house cursing Aleth while my siblings watch on in wonder) NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Her bible!! That man is a ...
Feb 14, 2020 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 15
NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! LUKE!! Oh my GOODNESS!!! That was amazing! I binged read this whole series today and if this is the end I cant handle it! I must know what happens ...
Feb 13, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Twelve
WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH ALETH!?!?!?!?!?! That little monster! I want to kill him myself! If he hurts Ky I will murder him! My thoughts: Ky: That poor poor ...
Feb 12, 2020 -
Re: On My Way
Poor Primrose!! She did not mean to hurt Liam, how did he get into Prim's back yard I wonder.... I wish you gave some more details on the neighbor hood ...
Feb 10, 2020 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 3
Wow that was great! I have to say I liked the first chapter best. This one could have used more details, her grandma sounds really cool I wonder if she ...
Feb 10, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Eleven
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Hate Aleth!!!!! Oh my goodness! My poor Ky!!! So well written! Please write more!!!! I love this story so much and wish that it would never end. If ...
Feb 10, 2020 -
Re: The Meeting
Wow! That was great! You should write more, maybe she and Anakin get together? That sounds great! I really like this idea, it is sad that Amaris's parents died I ...
Feb 4, 2020 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 1
I really liked it! I would like some more of a back story on Julia and Maddie. So are her parents dead or does she just live with her grandma ...
Feb 3, 2020