1nspire

Thank you so much!

I really appreciate the review, thank you for the suggestions!

Thank you so much for the review! Those are great suggestions, I'll see what I can do!

No problem:)

Thank you for the explanation, I look forward to reading more of your work soon!!!

No problem, I'm pretty new to poetry too. I'm glad to hear that things are going better!

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This is such a powerful story! While reading, it was easy to relate and sympathize with the protagonist due to your use of dialogue and imagery throughout. As a person ...

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Hey, 1nspire here for a review! I really loved the suspense that you created throughout the story. Oftentimes, the protagonist is one of the smartest characters, and seems to always ...

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Hey, 1nspire here for a review! I really loved the suspense that you created throughout the story. Oftentimes, the protagonist is one of the smartest characters, and seems to always ...

This is so cute! I love that you used second person, which is rare, but really makes this story so much sweeter. I love the way that the characters don't ...

I'm not sure if I'll post it or not, but I'm sure I'll add to this at some point.

I really appreciate the review. For me, this was just an outline, and I you commented, when I as you suggested, when I write the actual chapters, I'll be sure ...

I'm so glad you could relate, as that is the true purpose of any writing. I'm sorry that you had to go through that, but I'm glad to bring back ...

I'm glad you could relate:)

Thank you so much for the review! I'll be sure to fix the last line. Have a great day/night!