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Re: The Blue Principle (Prologue)
THIS IS AMAZING!!!! I've read this five times trying to think of any suggestions I can give to make improvements, but there's honestly nothing that I can say. I absolutely ...
Sep 22, 2018 -
Re: Babysitting (Flash Fiction)
Overall, the concept of the story is really good. It is very challenging to write a story in under 300 words, but you did it really well. I really liked ...
Sep 21, 2018 -
Re: Glass Walls
It's really brave of you to post something so personal, and I'm so glad that you did. This poem was absolutely beautiful, and I could tell that it was written ...
Sep 19, 2018 -
Re: The Little Man
I absolutely love the message in this story! I thought it was really clever the way that you ended the piece, and I love that there was a clear moral. ...
Sep 19, 2018 -
Re: finding sarah
Wow, that was...wow. I really like the way that you kept mentioning that it wasn't a normal day, and explained all the ways in which Sarah affected his life, even ...
Sep 16, 2018 -
Re: Unworthy Hero ~ Chapter 1
Hey, 1nspire here for a review! Let me start off with this, I really like that they superhero you've created is relatable. People doubt her abilities, which makes her a ...
Sep 16, 2018 -
Re: Crudeness of memories
This poem was so cool and interesting to read. I'm definitely not a poetry expert, but hopefully these tips will be helpful. First of all, the imagery is perfect. I ...
Sep 8, 2018 -
Re: Nothing Left to Live For
It just realized that I was supposed to be writing a review...oops. From the first sentence of this story, I was intrigued, and instead of actually focusing on suggestions, I ...
Sep 2, 2018 -
Re: The Runaway
That was a really cool story. I like the plot twist in the middle, and the way that it all seems to have happened for reason (Terry thinking about running ...
Sep 1, 2018 -
Re: Tumble: Chapter 1 A New World
That was an interesting start. You've created a very intriguing new universe. The main thing that stood out to me in this piece was the fact that every single thought ...
Aug 30, 2018 -
Re: Rejected
I only read the beginning of this piece, but from what I saw it was a great start! I like the way the characters have clear personalities and everything is ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Dear Dave - Extract 2
Hey again! I was so excited when I saw that you continued this story!!! Just like before, the protagonist had a distinct and relatable voice which I absolutely loved. Once ...
Aug 23, 2018 -
Re: Prologue
Oh my gosh, this was so amazing!!! As soon as I read the first sentence, I was intrigued. The importance of a strong beginning to a story cannot be overstated ...
Aug 9, 2018 -
Re: Paris Street by Andre Gustavas
This was such a great story!!!! I really liked the concept and the way that you introduced the painting as the setting at first. The imagery is amazing, and I ...
Aug 8, 2018 -
Re: The Chase
Wow, that was a really gruesome ending. I really liked the message in this story; by not sharing, it is easy to destroy the things worth fighting for. This is ...
Aug 5, 2018
