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This was such a beautiful piece of writing! I love how the figurative language you use adds so much to the story and makes it easy to empathize with the ...

The emotion in this piece was absolutely incredible. Your descriptions are perfect and really capture the theme. I wish there was something that I could critique, but this story is ...

Wow. That was a really unexpected but cool ending. One thing that really stood out to me in this piece was how spontaneous each event was. Most stories in this ...

I really like the story behind this piece and the way that a reader only gets a small insight into the characters. In only a few lines, you pulled me ...

Oh. My. Gosh. This is such an incredible poem! Rhyming seems like such a rarity nowadays, and it was refreshing to read a piece where it was so well executed. ...

This is so relatable. Even though I've never experienced this exactly, it's easy to see the narrator's point of view. The voice is phenomenal, I love the way that this ...

This is a really interesting poem. I love the way that you displayed events that seem so normal to us as a society to capture the essence of life, which ...

Hey Firerose! (I love your username by the way). Great work on this piece, it was really fun to read. Overall, I felt like there was a strong storyline with ...

I'm amazed at how much I related to this. It's so cool that you showed all the contradicting things girls hear. I liked the way that you repeated certain lines ...

This is a really good short story. As a few others have said, I would've liked a little more clarification in certain places, just to help the reader see the ...

Wow, this was really interesting. I think it's cool that you wrote in second person, which is pretty rare for short stories. The imagery is amazing as well, with lines ...

This is a really cool story. I loved the way that the first sentence immediately grabs the reader's attention! Also, I think the title is great and describes these events ...

This was an interesting story. I liked the way that you recounted a lot of events from memory and used specific dates, this helps the reader get a good sense ...

This was so cool to read. I've definitely thought about things similar to this before, and this piece proposes a very intriguing scenario. I really liked the use of questions ...

This is a really great start to the story. I really liked the plot and the way that each character has a distinct personality. It was also really cool that ...