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1998

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Bracelet

    You're welcome. Glad I was able to help.

    Nov 21, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreams

    Thank you. I've been writing for almost 2 years now. To tell you the truth I actually had to rewrite some of my first pieces. Too late. I already followed ...

    Nov 20, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreams

    Ha, ha! :D Don't worry.

    Nov 20, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreams

    The title is pretty deceiving when you actually read the poem. It is true that most writings with the title "Dreams" are about something magical and whatnot. I wrote this ...

    Nov 19, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreams

    Thanks for your review, Caliginous. I agree, putting "into" doesn't seem to fit well in that line. Thanks for pointing that out. You're very helpful. (:

    Nov 19, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: We Are One

    @Pernicus Like I said I'm not saying that everyone is the same. If I must tell you the meaning behind the poem to get you to understand, then that's fine ...

    Nov 18, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: We Are One

    I don't believe that we are all the same cuz that's not true. I don't see why telling me that you don't have any friends is important. My poem is ...

    Nov 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: This Girl

    Hmmm. Your poem is good, but nothing that is like BOOM! IN YOUR FACE! type of poem. You know what I mean? Try to use words that are unique and ...

    Nov 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Breakable

    Yo, Racket. This is 1998. I really like your work. It's very interesting, but unique at the same time how you wrote this poem. Keep writing. You are doing a ...

    Nov 18, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Death

    This is my first writing for whoever reads this.

    Nov 17, 2015


she slept with wolves without fear, for the wolves knew there was a lion among them.
— r.m. drake