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Re: Bracelet
You're welcome. Glad I was able to help.
Nov 21, 2015 -
Re: Dreams
Thank you. I've been writing for almost 2 years now. To tell you the truth I actually had to rewrite some of my first pieces. Too late. I already followed ...
Nov 20, 2015 -
Re: Dreams
Ha, ha! :D Don't worry.
Nov 20, 2015 -
Re: Dreams
The title is pretty deceiving when you actually read the poem. It is true that most writings with the title "Dreams" are about something magical and whatnot. I wrote this ...
Nov 19, 2015 -
Re: Dreams
Thanks for your review, Caliginous. I agree, putting "into" doesn't seem to fit well in that line. Thanks for pointing that out. You're very helpful. (:
Nov 19, 2015 -
Re: We Are One
@Pernicus Like I said I'm not saying that everyone is the same. If I must tell you the meaning behind the poem to get you to understand, then that's fine ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: We Are One
I don't believe that we are all the same cuz that's not true. I don't see why telling me that you don't have any friends is important. My poem is ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: This Girl
Hmmm. Your poem is good, but nothing that is like BOOM! IN YOUR FACE! type of poem. You know what I mean? Try to use words that are unique and ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: Breakable
Yo, Racket. This is 1998. I really like your work. It's very interesting, but unique at the same time how you wrote this poem. Keep writing. You are doing a ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: Death
This is my first writing for whoever reads this.
Nov 17, 2015
