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Hello vampricone6783! This was a cute poem for the little shape-shifting witch, Eerie. I liked the lines, "Eerie brought out the Treats with the candies But she also brought out ...

I gotta be honest, chrysanthemumcentury, I had no clue what to make of this when I first saw it! This was like reading an ancient mesopotamian slab. But I must ...

I believe that I shot myself in the foot for not reading any of the chapters prior or any of your older stories. It would have given me the context ...

Hello there friend! This story gave me a bit to think about. firstly, since this isn't the story as a whole and just a short expository piece it reads a ...

Hey there! This piece was a wild ride,with a bit of tragedy, action, fantasy, and romance. The crazy and almost anime-esque design of the characters and their powers is intriguing ...

A great continuation of the last chapter, and a very ominous ending! Mr Wyld being the theif responsible for everything is actually a funny twist, someone who talks a big ...

Hey whats up? :P I'm not too acquainted with stories on body dysmorphia and suicide, but these are thing everyone experiences to a degree. But I think your prose is ...

Hello there! I enjoyed your story, it was very sweet. I think the structure of the narrative was very clear, with the writing being grounded, it read like someone was ...

RIP Scouty :( Hey there friend! I thought you did a wonderful job at conveying that sort of innocent admiration that dogs typically have of their owners. And from the ...

This was very fun to read! The prose you use is wild and theatric, Nek is quite the narrator. I'm not used to reading mystery stories with a humorous twist, ...

Hey there pal! A nice piece you got here. Mark learns to appreciate a clear sky. I do like the comparison that Mark's mom makes between the sky becoming dark ...

Hey there pal! Glad to hear you getting back into writing. This was definitely chilling. It was more than once that I felt the same desperation that Aminta was feeling. ...

Hey there friend! Just finished reading this piece and I gotta say I'm impressed. I'll start by saying I love your prose, it was easy and sort yet not without ...