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Hi, my name's Matt, and I'm going to critique your work tonight. Enjoy :D Anyway, Nitpicks first. I can’t breathe without you. I can’t sleep without you. I just thought ...

Maybe that should be rated :D. I liked it. I would suggest a bit of punctuation, which is not needed, but it makes it easier to read aloud. Something I ...

Some nitpicks first: Black sailed tears I don't know if this is a phrase, but it really didn't make sense to me. Love unlocks my horizon with a moonlit cloud; ...

:( I feel awful now... That was incredible, but so, painfully sad. The last line was perfect, and really sums it up nicely, and the repitition from the bit at ...

Just a few nit picks: He heard only, his brother’s ragged breathing next to him. Remove the comma please. One morning after a terrible battle Both sides had had enough ...

I really liked the kind of feel you get from it, and it has little detail as to why, but it is so good that you don't want to know. ...

I have no points that June didn't point out, so I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed it. It's the kind of poem that makes your day when ...

I loved how it flowed. Not very sing song, but it was very personal and down to earth. If you're British, I have to say, it's very British :D. Otherwise, ...

Hi I'm Matt. I really liked it, it had a lot of mystery and emotion, all powdered up with angery, painful misery. I did find two little nit picks that ...

Hi, I'm Matt, and I'll be reviewing for you today. Soooo..... I did get a little lost on a few occasions, and I'm unsure about this royal family buissness. Are ...

My only thought was that it could do with some more length. You can do so much more with that little technique of saying that you're something bad and the ...

I liked the account, but I have a little thingy to say. Perhaps you could say why he's jumped into a frozen lake to die? Why is he not wanted ...

I liked it a lot. I think it was either about a couple breaking up, or a parent and child, so the meaning wasn't incredibly clear, but that's fine in ...

I really liked it, there were a few bits that went through my ears, but that was my fault. I liked the rhyming, and the feeling was good. The only ...

I liked the constant movement from past to future, because they build up a real atmosphere to show the bleak future ahead. Without them, it would be boring, but they ...