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I really liked this, it had rhythm to it and nice lyrics :) So keep writing ! xXx

I really liked this and the atmosphere you created :) Simple but good :L Keep it up xXx

Heeey :) The lines are quite punchy and this gives the meaning more impact. I'd just say write a bit more of it. Nice work, keep writing xXx

Oh it does have a chorus, the tune/melody is the same on these parts: Coz even this grey city Has more to offer me Than what you gave So I'm ...

Aww thankyou :) Ahaa glad you enjoyed it xXx

I really like the poem! It's believable and well written, showing the confusion and sometimes panic when older people's memories forget. Adjusting to that can be weird sometimes :S Nice ...

I think the "oh" makes more sense if you heard it, more like an Ooo

I liked the format it made the words "Highway", "Alive" and "Heart" like a secret whisper, and the gave the words an subtle, electric energy. It definitely made me feel ...

Aww thankyou very much :) yeah the website's kinda confusing at the moment :L but I'll get there. Thanks again for the feedback xXx

When you post lyrics I think it does that weird spacing thing anyway..whether you like it or not :S I liked it a lot maybe a little too much lovey-doveyness ...

It's a bit mainstream, and unoriginal but it would make a good pop song. Maybe develop it further and make it more personal xXx

Ha I thought it was funny :L randomness works xXx

Sounds great :) Simplistic but pretty effective xXx

I really like it :) It's hard to judge when you can't hear the actual music but it's good and it has a nice beat/rhythm xXx

Simple, sweet and conveys the message. I'm sure lots of people can relate to this :) I like it, good work xXx