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Yeah I can't really tell what time of tune this'll have. I'm assuming some sort of rock , distorted guiatrs, but slow? I have no idea. I saw where you ...

A cry of surprised pain was almost drowned out by the crack of gunshot. Like a scene from a movie, a teenage boy clutched his bloodied chest and fell over ...

This was sweet, definetly sweet (: I thought your description was really nice. For the majority this read very prose like, which mainly work, especially in the third and fourth ...

It's coming to an end [s]With[/s] For my boy and me, I'm leaving town So it's best that I'm free[s],[/s] . Yet for months I've had planned Planned what? If ...

Haha this was funny. Yeah it was definately a relief from much more darker stuff. I agree though the whole poem being written as someone talking, hmm didn't tickle me ...

Some parts of this really confused me. They were just too rambly >.< E.g: "A Darren-like incident?" She asks, though she already knows the answer. She's reffering to 8th grade, ...

Yeah this was very good. As Angel of Death said it's very simple but carries a strong, and beautiful message. I only had a few problems with this. Firstly I ...

This is good for your first attempt :D It sort of confused me a little and I didn't quite understand what was going on. I felt that the final three ...

Hmmm I just wondered if you planned on writing anymore on this. It really felt like it was going somewhere and I want more, MORE! But yes anyway, I would ...

Chapter 1 Have you ever gotten a headache? Probably. Have you ever gotten an “oh my God this hurts so bad I just want to die” type of headache? Probably ...

Yes this is really interesting. I didn't expect the ending. For the first four lines I was thinking 'Where is this going?' and then you answered it with the last ...

I loved this! It is such a great concept. You asked all the right questions, and really kept me wondering! My one blunder/problem type of an affair. You never came ...

Yes I though this was a really good poem as well. Great writing a poem about writing a poem :D Could I suggest you change the title to 'Poet' instead ...

How I Live Now = My true love :L I can't say any of her other two books reach the high standards set by HILN. Just In Case, I didn't ...

Ok wismann, I'm going to try and give you a very indepth review :D I'll go through the problematic areas first. The witches Madeline, Rose, and Sarah Canaby [I would ...