-KayJuran-

sorry but i gotta ask & it looks like this thread is the place 2 do it... is it true that in america, the letter 'Z' is pronounced 'zee' & ...

i got a Q 4 u if u dont mind... what is a draconian?!? i think maybe u shud try readin ur poem aloud 2 c which lines shud maybe ...

Hey, thanks everyone for all the comments! I'm going to go look at other people's stuff now... (realised I haven't commented as much as I could have done...)

Okay, well, I've thought of the next verse so here's the updated version for you all. stars whispered, gates closed. fear mounted, as red sun rose. a new day dawned, ...

i agree when u say freestyle is gud 2 try... until recently i only wrote poems using freestyle... it means u dont have 2 worry bout rhyming so u can ...

Thanks! Still thinking about what to put next...

thx! its really weird 4 me 2 write sumthin like this - normally all of my poems r really depressin... :roll:

sorry if i sound stupid but what is KND??... and is a cell phone the same as a mobile?

sorry if i sound stupid but what is KND??...

i like it! weird thing 2 write bout tho!!! :D

I want to add a couple more verses but I've got to think about it more... (it's meant to be the history of my story) I'll post it again once ...