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Thanks both for the reviews! i will review it and take your advice in as best as i can. :D

Thanks both for the reviews! I'm going to review it and hopefully improve it :D

LOL You're right! xD Anyway, it's your story and you do as you like! :D

thanks! i will read and review your poems any time soon :D

Oh! I would be so honored... *wide smile, teacher looking at me knowing I'm not working as I should :P* I can't wait!!!! What would happen between these three? A ...

LOL good point of view. thanks for noticing that mistake. It's like he wasn't a guy to me. He was a friend. And that just makes it worst. Anyway, thanks ...

Someone told me wealthy was something under rich. LOL I'm going to review it. thanks for the help!

yeah you're right. I mean she had reason to be mad even if she didn't had the right to be. they weren't dating (even if they wanted, the first step ...

thanks. you were right about the mistakes. thanks again for the review :D

OK... harsh but true. Just want to say something: first it wasn't a one-week it was six years. Second I have friends, i have family and I do have happy ...

Thanks! :D i worked for it... LOL

Ah... i don't know. I mean we never dated. We... I don't know what we were. And one day suddenly I never saw him again. Then i found out he ...

Ok... you're right! I mean, I am a teenage , but that's not an excuse. i completely agree with you. thanks I'll try to make it better!

It really made me sad... In other way it's good! i liked how you used vocabulary like you were the little girl that was being abused. Nice work (even if ...

I liked it. It's short but it ends right. I particularly love the end. In my opinion nice work! :D keep on the writing!