I liked it. It's short but it ends right. I particularly love the end. In my opinion nice work!
keep on the writing!
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I may be not be alone
Still I feel as if not a soul cares
Or much less looks my way
“Close your eyes”
I hear
“You have nothing to fear”
As if in a trance I obey
I can almost feel something that’s
Not quite so real
Reality slips away
For a while everything seems okay
I know crazy as it may seem
I will continue to dream
That somewhere out there
Someone is thinking of me…[b][i]
I liked it. It's short but it ends right. I particularly love the end. In my opinion nice work!
keep on the writing!
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