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Young Writers Society



Dark

by Arashi


I may be not be alone
Still I feel as if not a soul cares
Or much less looks my way
“Close your eyes”
I hear
“You have nothing to fear”
As if in a trance I obey
I can almost feel something that’s
Not quite so real
Reality slips away
For a while everything seems okay
I know crazy as it may seem
I will continue to dream
That somewhere out there
Someone is thinking of me…[b][i]


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Mon Nov 10, 2008 6:53 pm
*writewatiwant* says...



I liked it. It's short but it ends right. I particularly love the end. In my opinion nice work! :D
keep on the writing!




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Mon Nov 10, 2008 12:50 am
Silent music says...



Aww This is cute! You must have two reviews to post though!





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