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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Gifts

    Hi Flyer! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing ;) So, there's really just one thing I'd like to point out, since there has been many things mentioned already. It is ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: War Stories

    Hi Hawk! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, 'kay? So, the first thing I noticed here, structure wise, it that you have every first word capitalized. While some people might ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Death Clock

    Hi Flower Child! How are you? I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing this ;) Now, I really like this. The rhyming scheme gave it a little funny tone, that made ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Love is a Fools Game

    Hi Janay! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing this. So, first off I'd like to talk to you about flow. Because, for me, this poem if very hard to read, ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: New Song (acoustic)

    Just wanted to say something: if these are lyrics, then this is in the wrong forum. This is for poetry, there is a Lyrics forum. Please ask a Moderator to ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Just Come Home

    Hi Mage! As you asked, here I am, ready to review. So, first thing I'd like to warn you, was to watch out for the rhetorical questions in a poem. ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: House Of Dreams

    Hi Vale! I'm Kat, nice meeting you! I'm going to review this, okay? ^.^ So, first I'd like to talk to you about something: proper grammar. For example: I Open ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I Believe in Angels

    Juni =D I'm just gonna say something really quick, but first! A question: is this thingy related to that thingy on polyvore? ;) Anyway, I'm actually very impressed by how ...

    Dec 25, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Thorns & Roses [4]

    Hello! I'm Kat *waves* and even though I haven't made a review on this serie of chapters yet, I have been following it and clicking that 'star' thingy button :wink: ...

    Dec 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Be Not My World

    Hi Audy! I don't think we've met, but I'm Kat *shakes hand* So, you should be proud! This is the only review I'm going to make on Christmas Eve, mostly ...

    Dec 24, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Black Tears

    Hi peanut. Yes, no exclamation point. I'm too emotional to use it right now. So, I really liked this, even though I'm a bit confused. It's confusing, I can't really ...

    Dec 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mending Heart

    Hello Forest Queen! I'm Kat, but I think we've met ;) Anyway, review. Onto it. First of all, I'm going to slightly disagree with Eli above. Because! To me, when ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Chat-speak makes my tummy turn.

    Oh, have I done many of these! I just never posted them :P *bows before Amy* You're awesomely epic. But, no matter I always have to say something constructive. And ...

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I'll miss you my beloved friend.

    Hi Juni! I'm here, as requested. Anything for you

    Nov 26, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: End the Pain pt.2

    Hi Loveless! I'm back. You actually got me interested in this, so that's really good ^.^ I. Details! Suddenly I was looking down at myself, my lifeless body lay sprawled ...

    Nov 25, 2009


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