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Re: Gifts
Hi Flyer! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing ;) So, there's really just one thing I'd like to point out, since there has been many things mentioned already. It is ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: War Stories
Hi Hawk! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, 'kay? So, the first thing I noticed here, structure wise, it that you have every first word capitalized. While some people might ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Death Clock
Hi Flower Child! How are you? I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing this ;) Now, I really like this. The rhyming scheme gave it a little funny tone, that made ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Love is a Fools Game
Hi Janay! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing this. So, first off I'd like to talk to you about flow. Because, for me, this poem if very hard to read, ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: New Song (acoustic)
Just wanted to say something: if these are lyrics, then this is in the wrong forum. This is for poetry, there is a Lyrics forum. Please ask a Moderator to ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Just Come Home
Hi Mage! As you asked, here I am, ready to review. So, first thing I'd like to warn you, was to watch out for the rhetorical questions in a poem. ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: House Of Dreams
Hi Vale! I'm Kat, nice meeting you! I'm going to review this, okay? ^.^ So, first I'd like to talk to you about something: proper grammar. For example: I Open ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: I Believe in Angels
Juni =D I'm just gonna say something really quick, but first! A question: is this thingy related to that thingy on polyvore? ;) Anyway, I'm actually very impressed by how ...
Dec 25, 2009 -
Re: Thorns & Roses [4]
Hello! I'm Kat *waves* and even though I haven't made a review on this serie of chapters yet, I have been following it and clicking that 'star' thingy button :wink: ...
Dec 25, 2009 -
Re: Be Not My World
Hi Audy! I don't think we've met, but I'm Kat *shakes hand* So, you should be proud! This is the only review I'm going to make on Christmas Eve, mostly ...
Dec 24, 2009 -
Re: Black Tears
Hi peanut. Yes, no exclamation point. I'm too emotional to use it right now. So, I really liked this, even though I'm a bit confused. It's confusing, I can't really ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Mending Heart
Hello Forest Queen! I'm Kat, but I think we've met ;) Anyway, review. Onto it. First of all, I'm going to slightly disagree with Eli above. Because! To me, when ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Chat-speak makes my tummy turn.
Oh, have I done many of these! I just never posted them :P *bows before Amy* You're awesomely epic. But, no matter I always have to say something constructive. And ...
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: I'll miss you my beloved friend.
Hi Juni! I'm here, as requested. Anything for you
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: End the Pain pt.2
Hi Loveless! I'm back. You actually got me interested in this, so that's really good ^.^ I. Details! Suddenly I was looking down at myself, my lifeless body lay sprawled ...
Nov 25, 2009
