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What a poignant piece of writing. Though your word usage is simple, each sentence packs a punch. The other reviewers were right, it sends such a positive yet neglected point ...

Thanks so much, guys!

Invisible hugs to you all for such lovely reviews, never did I expect to get so many, and such positive ones too! I actually wrote this to compliment a story ...

Hiya, Ofir! So you asked me to re-review and here I am :D I'm really happy with the improvements you've made - the story reads so much better now which ...

This is me, but in a poem! I loved it, Derek :) *coco

Oh, I absolutely love this. It reminded me of skittles sweets :smt003 I am officially a fan! *coco

I'm loving this - really gritty, just the kind of genre I love to read. I'm really excited to read more! *coco

Oh, wow this is so sad :( But really good too! I can't wait to read more! *coco

Wow, Gabriella, this was sooooo good! Really scary and different. I can't wait for more! :D *coco

Brilliant, as always! Yay with the end, I was looking forward to reading more about Francois Despard. Good job, Attolia! *coco

OMG, this is so sad - really good but really sad. You've got a few awkward sentences in the beginning but apart from that I loved it and I can't ...

Thanks Aqua! It's good to be back!

I've completely revamped the story. Tell me what you think, guys :D

Please check out the changes made. Thanks a bunch :D

Well I was beaten to review the improvements but I still wanted to comment because I absolutely loved what you've done with this! You've made some excellent changes to your ...