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Hey, hippie! I came across this and thought I'd give you a good review. Hope this helps! Although there are loads of people doing the vampire thing, I liked this ...

Hey, Cassie! I like this, you've got a few little mistakes here and there but that's nothing that can't be fixed. Good job! I'm looking forward to reading more :D ...

I luuurve Assassin's Creed! Sorry lol, just thought I'd mention it! You were really brave for making an attempt to write a fanfic on it, it's quite difficult so I ...

Since all the nit-picks have been covered I'm gonna talk about how much I enjoyed reading this. The way you described the surroundings, the slow movements of the wolf, the ...

I'm gonna start with the nit-picks first. Sorry! I would recommend that you go back and edit this critically because you have a few mistakes here and there, but that's ...

I like this. Your narration is different but in a good way. You did have a bit of a problem with piling on a lot of information at times. My ...

I love this. I envy how beautifully you are able to describe the scenery, it's done wonderfully, so wonderfully that I can imagine being there and seeing and sensing everything ...

Good to have you back stealth! Hope things are alright. I'm not gonna moan about the shortness of the chapter, I'll let you off with that one :D . It ...

Welcome to YWS! You're title made me want to read this and I'm glad I did because I thought this was the start of what looks to be a really ...

You really shouldn't let negative comments affect you like that. YWS is a place where you post your work and have people give their opinions on it, which they're entitled ...

Firstly, welcome to YWS! Hmm, is this a prologue? If so, I hope you don't mind me saying, it's not a good one. You don't draw me in at all ...

Hi, sorry for the late review, I've just been so busy with my own story. I like this but I think that the way you present your story given it ...

Hi, hope you'll find this comment useful! I think you need to work on your dialogue and present it in a different way because right now you're kind of cluttering ...

This is awesome! Really, I love it! I can’t wait to read more and see where you’re going to go with this. Your writing is beautiful; I wish I could ...

I agree with tabithalillian completely. No matter how good your plot is, if your characters are flat they’re gonna bring the story down too. Your MC needs to show some ...