*DaughteroftheMoon*

Here is the review you asked for. :) Characters: We the readers can get most of Maria's emotion, but I would like to see more of Jon Doe's side and ...

I don't think its true, yet of course it may be since truths are just truths to those whom believe I like these lines for some odd reason. They drew ...

I will try to help this poem. It was as said before murdered with the redundancy. It became difficult to read and, well it messes majorly with the flow of ...

Okay, as i was reading it I also got the same impression. This is a cliche, love you so much, I hope we get another chance poem. Its teenage love ...

This to me, looks more like lyrics. In fact I think taht it would be better as a song. I do think that you could add some more imagery and ...

Okay so heres your review: Diction: This cursed side of me I hate so bad. For me in this state is sad. Try not to use words like bad and ...

I have remembered to half forget, That saying that so loud leaves one a target. For yelling, and hitting, or simply ones bidding, To catch you off guard while you're ...

Imagery: You have some really good imagery in this poem. And some really good metaphors. You are definately not lacking in that department. Your inagery makes the poem even more ...

Okay, there is too much repitition in this poem. I really don't like it. I would suggest that you change the sentance structure. It makes the poem extremely boring. I ...

This gave me a laugh and was quite true. Although, I wouldn't imagine anyone really giving this a review. If you want a line by line of course and you ...

When I was reading your poem, I noticed that a few lines seemed cliche to me. Hopefully you know what I am talking about? This rain cloud over my head ...

Slowly nestling against white fluff. A flash of icicles. Or maybe they were claws? No Kilimanjaro this time – the heat of Savannah is too far away. But maybe after ...

First off, I have to say, that I find this poem is quite cliched. The whole idea of it anyways. You didn't force this poem to rhyme which is great, ...

Characters: When reading this story, your character seemed a bit robotic. There was really no emotion to them. Nothing that makes me attached to them, or feel sympathy. I want ...

I had a few nickpicky line that I thought could have been worded better. Here they are: The blood is dry and it sometimes falls off in flakes. It could ...