Lumi reviews stuff

Could you please review my novel "Shattered Crowns"? There are eight chapters so far. I also penned an in-depth, spoiler ridden outline.

"Shattered Crowns" in depth synopsis

The Carpenter - Exordium of Shattered Crowns

Sally - Chapter One of Shattered Crowns

Wylfred - Chapter Two of Shattered Crowns

The Duchess - Chapter Three of Shattered Crowns

The King of Winter - Chapter Four of Shattered Crowns

Daegar - Chapter Five of Shattered Crowns

The Third Son - Chapter Six of Shattered Crowns

Son of the Black - Chapter Seven of Shattered Crowns

Note: My chapters are relatively long, so be warned.

Donezo.

Pick me =] Nostos

I must warn you though, "poetry" was the best category I could come up with since it's largely images/narrative though it doesn't adhere to any traditional line breaks/meter. Does that make me horrible? XD

As Things Became Real

Goodbye

Wander

Could you review any of these for me? I wanna make them better

i need help with my tenses n my pace. pick whichever u like

Beginning (part1)
Family and Friends (part2)
Fluffs (part3)

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