Lumi reviews stuff

You won't get nitpicks or candy-coating from me. I genuinely enjoy reading your writing, so understand that all criticism comes from a point of encouragement. That's all.

What I'll Review
--> Poetry
--> Novels
--> Art
--> Other

What I Won't Review
--> Short Stories
--> Articles/Essays

Glorious Fantasy Ch.1: A New world

I mostly wanna know what you think while reading it.

Plz and thank you~

Could you review this work? Dreaded Dinner Party

Donezo.

The Cyclical Nature of History

Could you please review this poem/prose thing I wrote?
Thank you!

I am looking for additional feedback on Voices of the Ice: Chapter 1

thank you very much.

Done-r and Blitzen.

Hey Lumi. If you're still open, I'd love for you to read anything of my Still Stone book that's up (so far). I was silly and didn't separate chapter one into different parts for length, so it appears quite long.
Feel free to review whatever of it you'd like to -- even if it's in the middle, or at the end. I'd really like some new perspective and fresh eyes!
Thank you!

Still Stone - one.
Still Stone - two. (part one.)
Still Stone - two. (part two.)

Up for a little change, Lumi? C:

If you have the time, Golden and I would love to have you review & critique the book cover(s) we made together for her book Edge.

I posted them over here if you wanna check them out.

Thankyou!!

Need reviews for the Myriad: Ascension Prologue through Chapter 3. I don't know how to make links, but they'll be in my the Myriad folder of my portfolio. I won't be insulted if you don't review them all.

Hi! I was wondering if you could review the poem I wrote called Cruel Crown.
Cruel Crown

Hey! So my work is kind of long with 5 chapters in one so if you stop half way through it is completely understandable. If you could please give me some of your feedback it would mean a lot to me. Thank you!

Here is the link:
(Undecided) #1: Ch. 1-5

Can you review my first poem: What Death Looks Like? I really need help; this is my first one and I really need a thorough review.

Thanks!

Back open for business once I get the backlog taken care of.