The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
Hello, it doesn't matter that you haven't read part one, all I need are some helpful pointers on my worst part XD.
It's part two, all that happens in part one is that there is a ball and the main character meets a friend. (Quick note: the main character's eye color changes with her mood.)
The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
Hey @JadeLotus ! I just wanted to let you know that I WILL review your piece, but I have some stuff going on right now so it might take some time. I hope that's okay
The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
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