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I will review ANYTHING, but if you ask me to review several chapters it will take a while before I can get to you.
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good day to you! would you remind reviewing this lyrical piece?

thanks!

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Sure! I'll get right to it!
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I really want people to use this, so I'm just going to poke it, and maybe someone will notice.
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Hi!!!

This is such a great thing you are doing! There's this story I kind of want someone to review, cause it's kinda urgent... It has a really simple title too. So if you have any suggestions for it then please let me know.

White Wolfina Hood

I'll be waiting for a review!

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Oh, and it's not that long either. Just a short story.
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I'll get too it!
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All done @Liberty500
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Could you review this for my friend? pleasee be gentle on her!
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Yes absolutely! I'll try not to nitpick. :)
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@manilla You don't need to worry about my nitpicking. There's nothing to nitpick. That piece is absolutely beautiful. I don't even know how I'm going to write constructive criticism on this one. I'll try my best.
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Hi @manilla!

Can you review my short story? It's called Fairy Diary | Day 6. It's a dramatic fantasy. If you need anymore information, please ask me. :)

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Umm... Did you mean for me to review it, or manilla?
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You! Sorry, I copy pasted, so... it was mean for you AND manilla
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