if you want your writing to be completely torn apart cmere

hey Jyva,

I am a struggling new young writer who desperately needs some good criticism. it would be absolutely amazing if you could review my short story, Brown Bear I will try to upload it I don't really know how to so I will try my best.

Brown Bear

I believe the link works.

Hey can you please review my article @Gwaenchana?

Hey there, Jyva! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

Good day!