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Moonlight: Chapter One
Moonlight:Chapter Two

Could you review these for me please? Thanks ever so much
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Hello and good day!

I'm a new member here in YWS.

I am requesting a review for my story, Chewing Gum An Angel's Mission.

Here is the link to my story:
Chewing Gum An Angel's Mission

Thanks for your time.

-Valerie




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Hey shima, can you review writers' block?
a lesbian disaster




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Don't know why this got closed (mostly because I was far too frequently busy to review anything.) Anyways - I am opening shop once more.




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Yeah, folks, I am still here. Would like to have some reviews come my way, please.




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Can you review ​https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/camusic/Seltass-first-kill-139222? Not gory I promise and was a fun write so I hope It'll be a good read. I'd rather brutally honest than well not, thanks in advance.




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Not sure if this topic still works (if not, mods, don't be too angry - I'll just create another one) but accepting reviews and whatnot.
Have improved my reviewing skills significantly in the two years I have been away, so be prepared for a rigorous and thorough review of your work. ;-)




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Hi shima.

I'm looking for a long time reviewer for my fantasy\ action\ adventure novel series: Quest for Fire

I've finished writing the first novel of the series and I'm currently on the second novel. Would you be willing to review my first novel and the chapters in my second novel?

If not, please feel free to turn this down. Look forward to your reply.

Book one: chapter one: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter One

Book two: Chapter two: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter One

Best Regards
Felistia.




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Of course, I would love to review your novel.
Big fantasy nut here, so high-fantasy seems like my piece of cake. :-)




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Hello! My work keeps getting heavily edited by myself so at the moment I need opinions! Please and thank you!

Mon Amour (Part I)
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.




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Sorry for the delay, I was busy. Tried to review it but kinda failed - it appears that you made it for your eyes only?




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Hey! Could you check out the last two chapters of my novel to get them out of The Green Room? The Rage (Chapter 7)




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Hi Shima! If you could review my work "The Ocean Is Not An Ocean" (Part 1) haha it would make my day!! It is only around 3k long thank you so much :))




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Hey there! I have a work with no reviews and I really want to know how I can improve my writing. I'd be happy if you could take a look at it! It would be easier to understand by reading the former chapter/s, but that's totally up to you. Here's the link:
Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
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