Would like to review stories and stuffs.

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Well hello there ! How do you do ? Come on in, don't be afraid. :-) Oh, you want me to review something for you ? Of course ! Just give me the title and I will be right on it !
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Follow The Stars (Edited)

This please! Thanks.
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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Done.

BTW - this is still open. If anybody needs a review.




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Please read an unwilling leader

(i dont know how to link it but its the only thing I have written on here)




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Oh, this is still active?

Glorious Fantasy Ch.1: A New world

Beyond the review on what you think of the chapter, if you can tell me how much you can stand to read of the story as a whole, like if you would want to read more, that would be nice. :D




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Well, both reviews completed. Ready player one, waiting for more reading.




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Did this one and two others. Will do the third tomorrow if I have time.

Waiting for more review food, folks.




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Up, up and above. Hopefully there are no rules against raising your own (dead) topics.




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Hey Shima! Would you mind reviewing something of Still Stone? I'm sending you all I have so far -- feel free to read whatever part you'd like. (I didn't split up chapter one into multiple parts, so it comes off a little long -- my deepest apologies.)
Still Stone - one.
Still Stone - two. (part one.)
Still Stone - two. (part two.)
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Hello! I need reviews for anything from the Myriad series except the original version. I don't know how to make a link (which would be useful information should anyone choose to volunteer it), but here's what I've written so far.

The Myriad: Ascension Prologue
The Myriad: Ascension Corso 1
The Myriad: Ascension Thørn 2
The Myriad: Ascension Nyx 3
Intrepid Explorer
Squire of the Green Room
Harbinger of the Cosmic Squid
Brief Castaway
Founder of Hermits United
TIME Magazine's 2006 Person of the Year
Dark Matter Overlord
Kind of a Big Deal




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Hey! I do not currently have a name for my work but it is titled (Undecided)

Here is the link just in case:
(Undecided)

Thank you so much!
~Sky <3




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Untitled (Zombie Apocalypse Romance Short) please?
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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Hi I would really like reviews for my realistic short story The Other Side I am writing it for a short story competition of which the deadline is tomorrow so if it can be done asap that would be really helpful thanks xx




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Yeah, Shima here. If anybody is still in need of a review - step right this way.



Find a place inside where there's joy, and the joy will burn out the pain.
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